by gotsitgood987
You were doing a good job of having her continue to fight him as that would be the most realistic. The responses of the body oftentimes can be an exact opposite of what the mind wants. You dropped the ball on this one.
I for one belive you "gotitgood" in this story and I would love to learn more about the place she is in. Is the woman who shaved her the only other woman Hayden has or does he have many. Will there be contention between the women once she is fully initiated. So many wondeful avenues to explore while your heroine is trained. Please give us a third installment at least.