All Comments on 'Tale of Tommy the Soldier'

Another historical romance that I very much enjoyed. I want to think that this is early October 1918, and Tommy won't have to return to the front again.

okay, I appreciate the effort to write a true "loving wife" story, but you still have to write a story.

A very nice story. Some might complain that it should be in Erotic Coupling category. But, considering the complete swill that has been dumped in the LW category, this is a pleasant welcome.

This story made me smile as it reminded me my first shop chief. He had five kids each conceived while on leave between TDYs.

Now follow it up with a story and a good finisg and you will have done it.

Nice.

But very short.

It's obvious this writer has talent.

I hope he gives us a longer LW story.

Nice Loving Wife's story.

I think I missed the story.

First and foremost, wrong category. Read the LIT expectation for LW ... it is tongue in cheek. Sweetie, in this scenario goes from clothesline to tea to bed. Nothing ‘adventurous’ there, even if posted in the (correct) Romance category.

Next, this must be set in the Great World War (it didn’t change to WW1 until there was another WW a coupla decades later) because of the trenches. Lucky no ‘mustard’ gas (actually chlorine.) They would have treated him in a field hospital, issued him another rifle and sent him back to the front! Especially if the blood was ‘oozing’ out. Several quick stitches and bed rest for maybe a week, take out the cat-gut and back to shooting Jerrys!

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Okay, well......one 'I've missed you" fuck does not a story make..........

Hi Readers, some comments have said wrong category, as apparently Loving Wives is about adultery, swinging etc.. Not really my definition of loving wives, as I'm a little old fashioned, but hey, Erotic Couplings then. Stone

Two thumbs up.

Category was fine .

The issue is, Got wounded in combat when home fucked my wife. Doesn't have the

basic elements of a complete story, characters, setting, plot, and conflict along with a theme,

good luck.

Readers, thanks for your comments. Yes, some of my stories might be a bit short for some folk's tastes. There's an introduction to some characters, then quickly move to some loving action; I don't feel the inclination to write a novel. Stone