All Comments on 'Talents - The Grey Girl'

BEAUTIFUL! Thank you!

Great concept and very sweet!

but not this story.

Perfect.

What a delightfully original premise! Well done!

beautiful story my friend!

very touching

I actually have tears in my eyes from this. Wow.. This is beautifully written. I have nothing negative to say about this story.

I enjoyed the main story, it was really good.

If you reference things like Talent, The Sentinel, or the goody/baddy groups then you must explain what you mean. This lost points and could gave been omitted without loss or the plot. Leaving out these meaningless things would have improved an otherwise good story immensely.

I probably should have prefaced the story, indicating it takes place in a world of superheroes. Thought that would come through naturally, but oh well.