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Click hereJoel nodded and bared his arm. He felt the pinprick and a slight pressure.
"It might take a few minutes," Jay advised.
While they waited, Jay explained, "I found what's in my blood that allows me to notice Mom, and adapted it into a retrovirus. Right now it's replicating in your blood."
Joel sneezed.
Jay looked sheepish. "You may experience some cold-like symptoms."
Then Joel noticed something out of the corner of his eye, a gray blob. He turned toward it, concentrating. As he watched, it gradually clarified into a human shape, then noticeably female. Finally...
"Grey!" Joel rushed forward to embrace the mother of his child.
"You can see me!" she cried, tears streaming down her beautiful face.
"Yes!" He turned to Jay. "Thank you, son."
Jay headed to the door. "I'll leave you two alone."
Joel fiercely hugged his dream woman, squeezing her hard and holding on as if she'd disappear if he let up even a little.
"We made it work," she told him. He nodded.
- COMMENTS
Krosisover 3 years agoAuthorI probably should have prefaced the story, indicating it takes place in a world of superheroes. Thought that would come through naturally, but oh well.
UltimateHomeBodyover 3 years agoI enjoyed the main story, it was really good.
If you reference things like Talent, The Sentinel, or the goody/baddy groups then you must explain what you mean. This lost points and could gave been omitted without loss or the plot. Leaving out these meaningless things would have improved an otherwise good story immensely.
Carmilla234over 3 years agoI actually have tears in my eyes from this. Wow.. This is beautifully written. I have nothing negative to say about this story.
