All Comments on 'Tales of an Unethical Hypnotist Ch. 04'

An excellent 4th Chapter and very much looking forward to the next one. Well written, well planned and well laid out; and as a consequence always realistic and believable. I loved it when Marsha grunted out "Fuck me Daddy" - very erotic.

He’s completely immoral but he waited until his daughter was 18? That’s like telling us a serial killer will only kill adults...it just doesn’t fit.

If he was able to do this to his daughter, without regret or remorse, then why should we believe that he did this only AFTER she was a legal adult? He clearly doesn’t care about the law, so why care about a number?

The truth is this asshole would be grooming her as soon as she was old enough to say “dada”. He wouldn’t give a flying fuck that she was his daughter or that she was a child...after all, he sure as fuck didn’t care after she was an adult.

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What was the third goal?

Umm, I guess the third goal was for me to hire a copy-editor. :)

I understand your point of view, though I submit 3 counterpoints:

1) In chapter 1 we learn that (like a lot of parents), until very recently, our protagonist just didn't see his daughter as a women. She was still, "daddy's little girl" and as such he never saw her in that light.

2) While not true for everyone, there are plenty of 18+ young women who are still just discovering their sexuality. They are still "innocent and corruptible." Indeed 2 of my own partners didn't lose their virginity until they were 23 and 24 yrs old.

3) Read the ToS of this (or any erotic fiction site), if it is not explicitly stated that all characters are 18+ the story will not be published (which is what happened here, and why I had to edit the story to include that language.)

The "Inconsistency" you bring up Anonymous is understandable, except the Literotica Chart of Stories makes it -Obviously - illegal to write stories about underage grooming/sexual activities. So even if the author wanted to be more "consistent" per your views, he couldn't possibly. There's a lot of strories on lit with 18 year old childs becoming active with their parents, clearly because the author couldn't make them younger

Excellent writing and great insights! The only thing I would say is that neither parent's job (nor goal) is to primarily be the kid's friend. The parents' first and consuming role is to model appropriate adult, parental, and primary relationship values. The child must learn that the parents value each other over the children else the relationship is not viewed as 'primary.'

While I don't go in for the incest thing, and it is, as your story title says, 'unethical,' the story is very well written. I just wish that I had been your editor.