All Comments on 'Tales of Chastity in Igranad Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow lot of world building inconsistencies with this one. Is it only the royal line who are caged? Are all men caged? If so how tf are people reproducing? How can he produce heirs of he is to marry a knight? Can he not still come from anal stimulation? How tf are they putting him in a tower surrounded by orcs in the first place if many knights die in the attempt. Who's becoming a knight in this kingdom if their goal is to die trying to get to a prince locked in a tower?

Lots of questions unanswered, consider revising.

IncubusStoriesIncubusStoriesabout 1 year agoAuthor

Actually I didn’t answer these questions on purpose, this is only the beginning of the story. I wanted there to be some mystery, I have answers to all of these and they will be told as time goes on

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I like the concept, but making the steel rusted instead of some other adjective makes me wince.

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Hi, my name’s Rhys and I produce new short stories every week specialising in gay and femdom. I also write series. I’m not picky in my subject as long as a male sub is involved.