All Comments on 'Tales of Transwomen Tops Ch. 04'

Damn, I am loving this series more and more! Keep it up!

would love love to meet a girl like her

excellent writer

Certified Banger 🔥🔥

Great story and series! 5 stars!

Super hot and a sweet love story.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Super hot and a sweet love story.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Hi! there will be more chapters? Wonderful story series.

My one bit of advice for British authors, if you are writing dialogue for American characters, use American slang. (ie. "ass" instead of "arse")

Its fine to use British slang for the British characters or in narration, but Americans don't use words like "tipple" when they speak.

PORN BUT a very enjoyable piece of porn. I think you know your target audience and you hit them right in the bullseye.

REGARDING MEHNTALITY’s comment about writing American dialogue for American characters. He/She is correct except in the early paragraphs of this story he says “Leaving my home country, the first place I’d wanted to visit was the United States.” You can’t make it much clearer he’s not American. It’s natural for him to say arse but for her to say ass.

AMERICAN writers and readers don’t make any allowance for stories set in other parts of the world or for non-American characters in stories set in North America.

IF IT AIN’T American English then it ain’t rite! 🙄

Hope her friends join in

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