All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 01'

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Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Dry opinion

Exciting beginning. Makes mind wonder of all the possible erotic lessons.

Anonymousover 9 years ago

...that was weird.

xtorch over 9 years agoAuthor

Weird?

It's only chapter 1. It gets weirder.

rightbank about 9 years ago

who is doing the watching?

who was her mother?

Anonymousover 8 years ago

The EU

All good sci-fi requires that the author thinks through the "universe" in which their story takes place first, and ensure richness and internal consistency. This seems definitely to be the case here. I am very hopeful about this series!

Dreamdog519 over 1 year ago

Curious! Different worlds different rules.

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