All Comments on 'Talulah Underground Ch. 01'

Hypnotizing. I've been to strip clubs but only to admire the girls. I know they get enough creeps hitting on them. I know two pole dancers personally, sweet, fun girls when they can be themselves. Also terrific sex partners when you show them respect. This was written nicely, loved it.

My first vote and comments did not "take" . This was written well, loved it. I know two pole dancers personally. They are sweet, fun girls when they can be themselves. They also make terrific sex partners when you show them some respect.

Glad you're back, Eve. Your style and imagination are memorable.

A feast for the senses "...spilled...like melted butter" yet "NOT FOR YOU" except for those dark watchful commanding eyes. Your story practically slides off the page and into the mind of this reader.