All Comments on 'Taming Monster Girls Ch. 01'

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chipmonk9chipmonk912 months ago

Who else thinks the demon-boys going to capture his own sisters if he has any

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago
Brackets

What's up with the brackets...were you working on your own vernacular and forgot? It's odd and unnecessary.

chifighterchifighter12 months ago

Interesting starts looking for more

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I see potential, but the writing is a bit rough and the chapter was too short to get a good feel for the story. I look forward to more (and longer) chapters.

Lord_JohnnyLord_Johnny11 months ago

I like where this feels like it could be going, but I definitely echo the sentiment that it is for too short.

Simonx69Simonx6911 months agoAuthor

To those who think the chapters are a little short, that is only the first 3 uploads as I had to get used to how this site worked. I made the rest larger.

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Hi, I am a novice author who started his writing journey sometime last year. The only restriction I put on what I write is that it has to have harem elements because I am a degenerate, otherwise everything is pretty open. I got some experience over the last year and decided to...

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