All Comments on 'Tammy Ch. 01'

Can't wait for the next part. Excellently written.

Just another of the horribly over used and severally abused black cock stories which are so fantasized they should be in the sci-fi section. Study anatomy a little, you might discover most cocks are about the same worldwide regardless of race.

Has it ever occurred to the idiots who write all this black on white crap that interracial goes both ways, what's wrong with white on black?

You indicated to be continued, do us all a favor and don't, you'll soon be another writer to ignore.

What a great start cara_calla. A concise, well paced erotic tale that masterfully displays Tammy's urges, fetishes and fantasies in one succinct chapter. Giving the story 4 instead of 5 stars is my only regret.

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All promise and tease no delivery. Very disappointing

Even for a chapter 1, that was too short. Where was the dialogue? Between her and the young neighbor? Where was the scene with her begging her husband to suck her milk? Basically...where was the story? Why all the tags for impregnate, breeding, BBC when none of that takes place?

Great start I love female authors and wish we had more, bring it on, love young black cocks taken care of by white moms, the nasty the better, hope Tammy eats ass and cum, not her husbands her black dicked teen, look forward to it

The power is always in the connection. You made that, now to see what you do with it.

I hope this keeps going, the style and insight is underrepresented

that was dumb. nothing happens in this story

Well written... I’d love to see where this progresses.

nothing happens in this story. so boring.

Tammy gets impregnated and her son has a mixed race brother.

Thanks for the feedback, publishing an expansion that will serve as the true Ch. 1 to what I hope will be a three part series. Cheers.