All Comments on 'Tango on the Razor's Edge Ch. 09'

by sinisterout

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vazkor13vazkor13almost 3 years ago

Just no.....despite your Real talent as a writer I just hate what you did to the MC.

I love the way you write,dialogs, description, it's all good....but the story...yuck!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What is this abusive garbage? Very strange...

transpuppettranspuppetalmost 3 years ago

I think Nicki's motivation for servicing all those other people was partially that he was starting to accept himself and partially that those other people expressed desire for him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I very much hope at some point there will be a breaking point when he starts to take control back and gets the better of Holly and Dan.

ResolverResolveralmost 3 years ago

Somewhat like the SNL spoiled milk skit.

Everybody agrees it's horrible, but they can't refrain from smelling it.

I think it was very well written; it certainly extracted the maximum amount of pain from each scene.

I'm hetro, but I've developed empathy for Nick.

What I don't understand is, is the author establishing Nick as superhuman? Does he really love whatshername that much? I don't see what the point is.

Of course, I, like many others wish for Nick to finally have had enough, an lay down a beatin on everyone from Dan down.

But I'm afraid before that, we'll see one or both girls emulating their mother and practicing their domination skills on Nick.

Hoping for a satisfying resolution.

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