by sinisterout
Just no.....despite your Real talent as a writer I just hate what you did to the MC.
I love the way you write,dialogs, description, it's all good....but the story...yuck!
I think Nicki's motivation for servicing all those other people was partially that he was starting to accept himself and partially that those other people expressed desire for him.
I very much hope at some point there will be a breaking point when he starts to take control back and gets the better of Holly and Dan.
Somewhat like the SNL spoiled milk skit.
Everybody agrees it's horrible, but they can't refrain from smelling it.
I think it was very well written; it certainly extracted the maximum amount of pain from each scene.
I'm hetro, but I've developed empathy for Nick.
What I don't understand is, is the author establishing Nick as superhuman? Does he really love whatshername that much? I don't see what the point is.
Of course, I, like many others wish for Nick to finally have had enough, an lay down a beatin on everyone from Dan down.
But I'm afraid before that, we'll see one or both girls emulating their mother and practicing their domination skills on Nick.
Hoping for a satisfying resolution.