by yembrose
That scene between Tannah and Fanazar was the single hottest thing I have seen in my entire life. I really hope Fanazar isn't dead - he didn't deserve to die - but Gavwen and Jelek certainly got what was coming to them! I wonder if Tannah will see Fanazar again if he is alive still (fingers crossed), and this was a really good story overall. Well done!
This chapter certainly lives up to the name of the series- Tannah the Warrior, culminating in a dramatic fight scene between the heroine and a particularly nasty opponent. This is certainly a gritty and violent chapter, but the writing is excellent, and not a word is wasted in this exciting sequel. The romantic episode is, however too short; were it longer, it would have heightened the drama of what follows afterwards. However, this is an excellent chapter nonetheless.