by wet_pants
WOW - excellent novel length story.
Congratulations on writing such a great story including lots of yummy sex of course. Magnificent first contibution to the site and I look forwqard to reading more.
I loved the character development, and the emotion, but I was a bit put off by the persistent golden showers and crapping. That does nothing good for me. Some people, yes, but I suspect not the majority. Otherwise a very passionate story, and if it is indeed real, you three are very lucky.
I can't believe that this was a first attempt at writing erotic fiction, nor even annotating erotic fact. Super story, super characters, super SEX.
Let's have some more!!
It is rare that someone can take a subset of my fantasies and make a story about them without having to throw in violence or domination or belittling at least one of the characters. You have done it. Love and giving. Thank you. Oh my stars ... thank you. If there is more, I would love to read it. If not, thank you. With tears of joy in my eyes.