All Comments on 'Tanya'

I imagine this as being modern day but I am unsure as to the time period it takes place in. Is it modern electronic or the old days of pistol and cannon?

Please continue ASAP! I do hope she doesn't get pass around :P

There's always a but isn't there! I do hope you continue in the same reluctant/ non con vein, don't turn her into a magic cock victim where suddenly she wants this treatment. She has shown spirit and reluctance so well in the way you have portrayed her, it would be a shame to see her become a passive willing "victim".

5 stars for a job well done.

You are to young to write such a strong story.try a little more tenderness before you drop the hammer. This is a very strong subject, but I do enjoy the attempt. Keep writing

Yes, please continue. It has a promising story line...and we at least need to know what happens when the crew get her. Public sex is always a turn-on..! A bit of public flogging would be good too....thanks!

I thought this was a very good story, especially if a first public posting. It read well and got straight to the sex, which is why we're here, is it not? But good writing is a plus and you've got that down pretty well, in my opinion at least, and for what it's worth.

for a good start. As for Lyndsay from jadewinchester, i love that fact that Tanya has fight and spirit in her.