All Comments on 'Tara'

Wow! Great start! Can’t wait for more!

Please make more!!! Asap!!!

plus please

more

pls, please write more! love your style, love the dynamic of the sissy girl and tara, my favorite flavor of dom/sub is when the sub is actually enjoying the control, even tho tara’s treatment probably counts as a crime against humanity lol, it’s just so, good.. i never even liked sounding, or giant cocks, or throat stretching before this, but you took me to new places.

one request. can tara have another way to pull off the chastity for baths n such? just me, swallowing the key was super hot, but i dont like truly perma chastity because it’s gross when you think about it for a second. tara being able to pull it off for cleaning sessions maybe with just her bear handed strength would fix that and still be hot, making the sissy depend on her harder, only tara would be able to bathe her down there of course. that is if the sissy still has her balls and erections much longer to even need the cage, i’d support the other option too! there’s so many ways this could continue, like what are those other tools for by the bed? i await it and hope you have plans to write it. pls, more

Wow, thanks for the feedback. Yeah I think she has a spare key for cleaning. She was pretty much just fucking with the main character lol

Hell yeah, round 2, please!

Too much unnecessary text. For example, a paragraph about lunch at the beginning is not needed at all. If you take it away, history will not lose anything except an unnecessary piece of text. And this is not the only example.

I don't agree that it was too wordy. It let the tension build up. You knew eventually where it was going but the tension made it much more enjoyable. Loved it and would like to read more.

Yeah sorry I was going for a real slow build up so as to create a sense of tension, as krissy said. In future I'll put 'slow build up' in the description or something

this is a great story. you have real talent. I really hope to see many similar stories from you.

thank you very much for your work.

Awesome story! Hope to see more of your work soon.

I really enjoyed your story. It was well done. I hope you continue with this as soon as possible!

I love the domme in Tara. Her cock sounds magnificent!

Great start

5 stars for a very well written and mysterious story. Fabulous characters and premise, although the story went off in a direction I’m not sure I understand. I’m getting that he has been drinking Tara’s cum and it is changing him mentally and physically…am I reading science fiction and didn’t know it or what? However, I love the dominant way Tara is now in control and how she’s talking to and treating him, so I’m excited to read the next chapter to see if my questions are answered. Great imagination to come up with this story idea…the effort is appreciated.