All Comments on 'Tara'

There are a few mis spelled words which makes the story a bit hard to understand. Some sentence structures are a bit clunky. As far as the actual story, it was okay.

Yes, I agree with the other comments. I also encourage

you to keep writing. The characters have the potential to

explode into a Hall of Fame series.

Please by all means, keep developing the story and your

characters. Make sure you proofread.

Have fun with your story.

Can you make this into a series?

except for a few typo's it was a good story, and fantasies are also so much better because you can think of anything and no one says no