All Comments on 'Tara and the Presidents Ch. 03'

loves how she turns from scientist to slut in this chapter!!

And I echo the sentiment about the corruption of her thoughts being hot, but personally I hope she retains her intelligence, sex-focused as her thoughts may become. Obviously it's up to you how the story olays out, but thought I'd throw in my two cents.

It's a common criticism I get that my chapters are too short =( it's just my style overall, and if I don't have multiple scenes in chapters, which I usually don't because they don't logically go together, then I end up with these kind of "mini-chapters". Probably more often than not. Sorry for that!

I don't think it's spoiling much to say she will retain her intelligence, though there will certainly be some shift in priorities due to the competing impulses within... ;-)