All Comments on 'Tara Ch. 05'

after a long leave.

I re-read chapter four to refresh my memory.

What a frighteningly cold-hearted bitch you made this Tara character to be.

Glad to see some humanity show through now, and waiting to see where you will lead this story.

Read the whole story through, Didn't like the 4th chapter quite as much as the others. Need more details of sex, not war. Please continue this story.

Keep up the good work on this story. Needs more chapters for sure,

need more chapters. i am in love with this story. the tale reminds me of xena and gabrielle from xena warrior princess. :)

so please come back and write more.

As much as i like the story so far well written and good story telling. The fact that the main character seems not to have a single redeeming quality seems a bit harsh. Ending of chapter 4 was basically torture , she even killed the enemy with less pain then her slave/punching bag. the "She deserved it" part was particularity heartless. Still very curious to see what happens next.

its such a shame that the series seems to end here given that the writer has taken so long to write the next chapter. i can only hope that the author will return and carry on this tale. this is a story that should be continued. very well done....

There is one massive problem I have with this story, and that is the fact that the author has made the main character Tara to be a completely heartless and hateful sociopath who garners zero fucks worth of care from this reader.

Other than that, great story.