by jessanddrew
You did a wonderful job in this little story by making everything the older sister did seem reasonable under the circumstances. Instead of her kinks being portrayed as something unpleasant, she behaved in a way that satisfied her own needs to be served sexually. I would love to see you develop these characters more because this is a great start.
looking forward to the continuing adventures of Carly and Sophie
Please let someone proof read, the story was good, but mixing up eg. his/with? Happened a bunch of times where I had to read twice to get it.
I liked this one a lot. I'm glad you favorited one of my stories, as I don't know if I would have discovered this one otherwise. So... thanks!