All Comments on 'Taught a Lesson for Spying'

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PixiehoffPixiehoffover 4 years ago
Nice crisp and erotic

A sexy story well told.

lesliejoneslesliejonesover 4 years ago
Well-told and just the right intensity level

You did a wonderful job in this little story by making everything the older sister did seem reasonable under the circumstances. Instead of her kinks being portrayed as something unpleasant, she behaved in a way that satisfied her own needs to be served sexually. I would love to see you develop these characters more because this is a great start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good start ....more please

looking forward to the continuing adventures of Carly and Sophie

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Language

Please let someone proof read, the story was good, but mixing up eg. his/with? Happened a bunch of times where I had to read twice to get it.

OneAuthorOneAuthoralmost 4 years ago
Really, really good

I liked this one a lot. I'm glad you favorited one of my stories, as I don't know if I would have discovered this one otherwise. So... thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Like the story a lot like to read more of the two of them

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young lady finished college like writing stories that people can enjoy and when i say enjoy i mean really enjoy