All Comments on 'Tawny's Hair'

No character development, no details, just plain lame.

Seth is kicked out of his dorm, but recovers quickly by being invited to move in with two female students. Having two hot willing girls on hand - is enough to make anyone want to get kicked out of their college dorm. *grins*

OK, Having the guy creep in and stare at her for a few weeks, before he does anything physical would make sense. They would also have to be friends first for a while. There was no background to this story. No way of knowing how they would have reacted.

You talked about a boyfriend, but there was no details about him. This story needed to be a book, but it wasn't.

It seemed like you got horny, and just raced to your own spank session.

And enjoyed being in it, too! And how did you know I sing off-key?

A great read and one that made me laugh as well. Looking forward to reading more.

janiexx :)

But I liked the lighthearted humor in the story, and the happy ending for all concerned ;)

I like your writing style and the subject, women's hair. I want to read more about the three of them.