All Comments on 'Tax Debt Solution Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
...Marci and Lisa are SO HOT and READY !!

,,,,,good character development again.. now, write that series about Lisa and Marci's jobs as the beach bar's erotic masseuses at the Hilton's nudist resort in Cancun and they are popular and average 18 half hour "sessions"per day and they are live on the internet 24/7 and the resort has to build bleachers for the loud, drunk audiences ..the NFL &NBA NAACP conference is coming ..Shak (7'6"380LB.) has a 2HR. each day appt. and it is live on ESPN3..what fun..please keep writing.. THANKS ,,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Another chapter of choice.

Once again you have exceeded my expectations. This was one hellova story. I'm hoping there's more on the writing table about Marci and Bob.Ciao

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Marci needs more big cock hot hot hot

yourdarkmistressyourdarkmistressalmost 13 years ago
5 Stars!

Excellent story. I loved the dick that was so incredible, Marci would do anything to have it. I was pleasantly surprised when really like Josh's dick popped into Marci's cervix. This is only the 2nd story I've read where that happened, & it was a jaw dropper for me. The jury's still out on if that really happens, but the thought of it gets me really hot. The control Lisa had on the "victims" was really well done & I loved it when she tilted her cunt so Bob's cum ran out all over Marci's face.. Great story overall, one of the better I've read on the site. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Gee

This is the kind of story that turns me off, do you people really think this is a marriage or a wife you would want. Puke Puke Puke.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ruined the story

A cervix won't open like that. Why ruin a fun fantasy like this by writing something physiologically stupid at the end?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Story 5 stars

I enjoyed the story, very hot sex, very good build up. but I agree with the other comment about the cervix. My wife says that is a very painful place. Also way way up there. No way she says that a woman would enjoy having that bashed into, unless they are super into pain. Since she's the only woman that I've talked to about it I'll assume she's normal.

Otherwise a great story, just that one small thing about the cervix and unfortunately it's something that a lot of stories have. But on the other hand we all suspend belief when we read these stories so why not a little more.

I loved it.

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