All Comments on 'Taxi For Mrs Cole'

Dire.

Previous comment was too kind - this is complete and utter rubbish!!

go on then man if you think it's so bad tell me what i can do to make it better

keep writing. To please some of your critics if you care use a spell checker then proof read either way I'd like to read more of your stories :)

I didn't see any major faults in your writing it probably just needs some fine tuning. Great taste in women though love to read more about Cheryl

I think this story would have been much better if Ms Cole had been totally humiliated andleft in the gutter like a drunk clut like that deserves. You should have got her down to her panties and dumped her in a park in South London to be dealt with by the locals!!!

and because of this I couldn't get into it. You should have decided a tense to write in, instead of swapping to and fro, and stuck to it. Using a spell checker wouldn't have been a bad idea, either. However, good choice in celebrity and if you were to revise this, I'm sure it would be a lot better.

again gr8 taste in women ;)

..you do have a great taste in women :)

more of Cheryl or Jennifer Ellison would be great!

Cheryl Cole would have to have been totally ratarsed to have sex with someone like you. She was gagging for cock. You wish man. Who are you going to do next. Keira Knightley? Dream on!

Tht was awesome

WOW!!!!!!

get in there mate, i could actually imagine the whole thing which was gr8 lol, (cheryl not you lol)

was she good? i bet she was ;)) shame you aint got any photos to back it up :/

What a load of wank!!!

I dream about Cheryl, shes the sexiest girl in the world, and this made me imagine her getting fucked love it!

That was one fucking great story ever

cheryl cole has a penis