All Comments on 'Taylors Sorority Pt. 01'

Yawn...maybe the chapter would be better if longer.

oh that was short. I like slow burn stories but I also like some content, so maybe add two dares a chapter or be a little more descriptive of what's going, what Taylor's thinking maybe some conversation between her and Kaitlin. For only your second story you are doing good. keep it up and thank you for showing us your talent.

Pappasleaze!

Fun little snippet, but needs more description of feelings and her nervousness about exposure. Your writing is hard to read: you have some paragraphs that are only a single, and very long, sentence.