by KindestCalvin97
Well done, although it will probably find a more recptive audience in gay male. On the other and, if you continue it and g bring the rest of the familt in, it could work.
Second person gay shit, what could possibly be worse than this? Take it elsewhere, please.
Loved it! Definitely worth a few more chapters. Made my dick hard and want more!
Father / son isn't my favorite, but not a deal breaker. Thanks for sharing.
Homosexual stories aren't really my thing but it was a good story. The only think I would change about it is that in most of the instances you used the word 'you' I would instead use 'I' because most users wouldn't be reading this out loud, they would be reading it in their heads.
Best way to understand is to read it in your head and replace 'you' with 'I'.