by Hooked1957
Wow. A Traci who was a wonderful and truly loving wife. Amazing. 5 stars for a heartfelt story. Felt sorry fir both Greg and Traci with his wasting illness. Her times with the MC were interludes in a difficult time as she watched the love of her life die a little bit every day. Greg was a courageous and loving husband. Hears to their eternal happiness.
A great combination of a young man's fantasy and a heart-warming story. Good job!
Five stars for this great tale, loaded with emotions as a young man really grows up into a good person...
not what i expected and can only hope when my time comes someone will be by my side .
"Although the doctors didn't think it was serious enough to warrant a surgery, some other issues made surgery a risky proposition." - Gotta put in my nitpicker hat here. If it WASN'T serious enough to warrant surgery, why would it matter that surgery was a risky proposition?
Wonderful story. Satisfying on so many levels. Very nice job thwarting our automatic Traci expectations by making this Traci a positive role model in every way. 5 *
Lucky lady. Very compassionate friends that gave back what she taught. It was good what ends well.
Loved it, like a past commenter said it brought a tear to my eye. 5 stars
But I'm wondering; would a dying man really want to spend his last years with his woman fucking another man? Or knowing she was so weak she may give into some kind of temptation?
Still beautiful story
Thank you, Hooked. You are a gifted writer; this is one of your best stories, without a doubt! Five stars ⭐️ for this one.
A heartfelt five-star love story. I was hoping Robert would marry Traci. Your ending however is a master-stroke. Very emotional.
A very moving story but the sharing of sex even under the circumstance is questionable in my mind. Sex to some, I guess, is just sex. To others sex is a very intimate thing between two people, it's sort of a bonding, just my thoughts. 5 stars
Just so grody. This author loves the hags. Traci couldn't make due with a dildo? Greg was a sniveling chuck.
Lovely story.
To the " discreet" anonymous, the word is properly not property. Everyone makes mistakes....
It felt real. I did not comment when I read this some time ago, but after a 2nd read I found this to be a solid effort to humanize an incredibly difficult situation. 5 for sure.
I jumped to the end just to write a comment. For once, somebody property used the term discreet. All the other bozos write discrete instead. Wrong, wrong, wrong. Now, back to the story.
Damn onions. Kudos Hooked 1957.Takes a good tale to get this old axe handle to leak.
This was so much more than an LW story. It was a primer on compassion, generosity, and devotion by a loving and selfless husband, and a very mature level of integrity on the part of a teenage young man. yes, in the strict sense it was a loving wife story, but overshadowing that by far was an overwhelmingly poignant loving story of true affection, trust, and honour. Thank you!
Thanks for that, a tail full of love, which on here is somewhat rare, nice and evenly paced a tearjerker if ever I have read one
For a change the comments all are positive and the tale worthy of the accolades. Thanks Hooked for one of my favorites.
somewhere east of Omaha
Sad, brings back memories of my wife passing. She had been sleeping for two weeks. I was checking on her as she lay in bed, she opened her eyes and looked at me with a big smile and said "I love you" and went back to sleep she passed a few hours into the early morning laying next me. It's been three years and I still miss her, we together 40 years.
A very touching storey, I liked it very much, the best of yours I have read so far. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
A beautiful and touching story of caring, consideration, great respect and a special kind of love❤️
We ended adsorbing this story in our hearts with heavy misty eyes holding back tears.
Thank you for sharing this one and bringing us a heart warming ending of everlasting togetherness in the forever after! So many of us should be so fortunate to experience the in-depth feeling that this work touched on.
By far, one of your very best!
Thank you again.
SW
I havent commented on alot of your stories but this was so well written and brought tears the last few lines thank you solid five.
You've written some excellent LW stories and some not so excellent. But you've outdone yourself with this one.
Very beautiful story and without conflict of any kind. It gets a high 5. It reminds me of a custom I read about the Eskimos.They share their wives with friends. I wonder why our society makes no provision for allowing under special circumstances for casual sex.
Sorry, that was me below. A little more eroticism would have helped, I believe there was room for it, including perhaps about Robert's own wife.
Cannot give 4.9, so, you got the 5
This is a wonderful story. If this is the true meaning for cuckold then so be it.
Robert keep his word all the way to the end. There was never a loss of trust or respect by anyone.
You are very good with your writing and hope that we can see a lot more of your work. Thank you P.s. you sure can make people cry with some of your stories me included.
@Nitpic
She was using the highschool gym to work at at. Happens in our school district. Our highschool has several sets of gyms across campus actually. And the football teams is much nicer than the local Golds.
Excellent story the caratures were well put together the transitions were expertly brought together. You have what it takes to write great books congratulations on a well written story.
Nice story,but as Traci was his teacher before high school,how could he bump into her there?.
I hated it, I cried and got myself together and cried again. I read every last word. Well written
Damn, just damn...wow I'm blown away. This I put as one of my top 5 stories, Thank you for sharing it with us.
Not my usual taste in stories, but I love this one. A rare likable Traci from Hooked.
a super compeling story, you are the greatest in your tales, please continue with great storys
Tears. A beautiful love story. Best story on here, period.
After reading this for the second time I am still moved beyond belief. Its a good thing one of us is good with words. One thing did come to me - THIS is the Traci that all the rest should have been. Thank you.
somewhere east of Omaha