by quale
Not bad, but the plot was standard and predictable. Could be helped by adding unexpected twists like a maintenance guy unlocking the door and catching them in mid scene... Ms. Carter might be forced to choose between no condom and anal sex as an option or be given no choice at all. Keep writing, your story has potential. :)
Loved story hope there is a part 2 at least but would of been nice of been more descriptive about Ms. Carter can't really picture when just told big fake tits and dark black hair
By the end, it might as well include dragons and alien monsters.
Your best story yet. Consider having Ms. Carter confide in someone like an old family friend, school peer, counselor or her professor/mentor when she attended university. Naturally the information is used to "use" the lovely teacher in various and sundry ways.
I hope you will had several other chapter to this excellent story. The blackmail in the classroom may be kinky.
I look forward to reading the next chapter of her being blackmailed into submission in delicious circumstance.
First of all "yeah" contains an "e". I am still not sure what "mounded" means, and you just left out letters and sometimes even words. Get an editor. You have potential, but it's obvious when you're writing that you get yourself aroused, because the mistakes become more frequent. Try reading through it when you're done, and maybe you'll catch these errors.
Loved the story and plot, Ms. Carter's feelings and pleasure are an amazing read. This work inspired me to probably start my own stories.
I would also like a sequel to this.
Very erotic read. You definitely need to do a sequel to this. Maybe another dozen chapters. Nothing too far-fetched to break the "believability" of it, but definitely more on her adventures!
I agree, one of the best stories (If not the best) stories on the site.
Any chance that you will wrtite another chapter? I certainly hope so. Please let us know if you are going to cvontinue the story!
MORE PLEASE, You have got to continue this story and 'record ' her further adventures.
Do not give up now, there are plenty of readers waiting so come on.
fucking great i am cumming like a waterfall after reading this and i am imagining to do this with some of my ex school teachers who dont even wear panties.I used to go for tution to a school teacher.She was always braless.One day she wore a blouse which had a hole at the nipple area.She gave me a nice view.I kept staring at her bare areola while she was teaching.Suddenly she caught me staring and you wont believe ..she didn't scold me.instead she smiled and to my surprise she took off her blouse and said:take a better view!I couldn't say anything but she said:'come on and touch my breasts.I fondled her breasts for almost 30 minutes.She moaned and enjoyed.Suddenly i found her hands fondling my bare cock.I was so busy with her breasts that she had pulled down my 3 quarter pants and my underwear.Then i wasted no time and took off her skirt and she was pantyless.We had great sex.We did it many times.She has also told her colleague teachers about our sexual relationship.They have told me that they want to have group sex with me.All female milfs and me.
Teacher Needs a Lot More Discipline! I Want to Read About It!
as well as spellchecking. It’s kinda far fetched and unrealistic even whilst being predictable. She could’ve maintained control by refusing them sex outright or even refusing sex without a condom. Their phones should’ve been confiscated first to preempt the photographic/video evidence.
I loved your story. As a gay man I rewrote it as if the teacher was a gay man that the boys turned out. Because of the breast implants I pictured him with pierced tits. I would enjoy seeing a second part.
Super hot the way the teacher's arrogance got her into a position where she's naked and then fucked and covered in cum by her students. Plus it ends with her fantasizing being their helpless sex toy for the next year.
I love it when women of power get overtaken by their own lust and humiliated. Your story fit that theme really well.
Very hot story. I would love to see more but it needs much better proof reading. It's filled with partial sentences and missing punctuation which detracts from the enjoyment of the story.
A part 2 would be nice so we could get confirmation she became pregnant with his kid