by justerotic
Yes you can write a story about Hana?
I hope Karen, Melissa Aida and Susan have a happy ending.
Thinking of giving them a POV?
I hope Jason is fine and everyone else pays
@justerotic is more your writing than my ideas! You should take all the credit.
I enjoyed the story. One comment, you make references to the piercings and tats, it would be nice to remind the reader what they are from earlier in the story
Great to see the story, already waiting for the next one. Yes, write about Hannah if it doesn't slow down Jessica. I hope the new direction still has lots of screen time for her and her ordeals.
Feels like Rachel has modified, not just evolved. I know you told us this would be dark, but I really want to see her get her comeuppance.
Absolutely worth the wait! I’d like to thank “Worthless Whore” for all the help she gives not only to writers but also the readers. Helping navigate through stories and helping understand and find things in searches.
Also a great big thank you for continuing to write this story and more chapters to follow will be great. It has been a great story this far and I love the twists that continually keep it spinning.
Okey so great story...
In the next one I would like to see like jessica has to make a video or a written confession or divorce or something to jason as a punishment to her for telling the blackmailing stuff.. and at university there should be more humiliation for her...now that students know about her she could have dresses more sexily and revealingly... she could oil her self in that erotic oil whivh make her horny and teach in the class.. And i hope to see next weekend in the island speculum gape in her p*ssy and ass and chilli or nettle torture... meanwhile jason could be also made a slave but I think it would ruin the story or something...
Hey I think you might be able to grasp some ideas from the story "karen and mitchell's sad story" in bdsmlibrary. I'm actually looking forward to see some of those stuff in your story also....
Can't wait to read more fromm you!! My hats off to all who helped in any way to get this story to a readable platform..(didn't want to miss any names, and all involved, regardless of amount, deserve kudos) . So wonderful to read different , hot , inventive, new, did I mention hot..? In one of these stories. Please, carry on!
Any story suggestions would b most welcome.....
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I love your blog "Teacher's Delimma" Can't wait for more about her and where you take them
I did attempt to join Patrion site and wasn't able to navigate it easily.
It's been 6 months. I hope the next one is soon. I am looking forward to their plans starting to go BAD.
I absolutely enjoy your style of writing, and your stories will chapter 11 be released here, because I signed up for patreon to follow you there and it won’t let me get a membership. Please let me know.
Dont worry, i have it on good authroity that the story is not dead....Just taking longer than expected to get right! I'm sure we would all prefer he gets it right, rather than rushing something out! This is such a complex story thats with so many sub-plots it needs to be right!
I would love to give this story a five, but it died before being completed. Too many loose ends. I hope it is continued.
The one stories comparable to this classic is Summer Blackmail and Owned Teacher. Unfortunately, all three have one thing in common. They were never finished. Sigh
The only thing I really dislike about stories like this is when the author starts to lose the plot. Blackmail plots work because they're contained. Once you start burning warehouses and damaging things at ports, it brings in federal attention and no domestic gang ever has their operations survive that. Not the mob or the Crips or the Hells Angels. They leave the exposed members to burn and they cut ties with those operations. Cartels and foreign based criminal enterprises have more options because they've got less exposure, but in the end, if real consequences don't happen the whole story just becomes a comic book parody of a crime drama.