All Comments on 'Teacher's Pet'

Amen to that, reverend!

Ever notice it's always a black guy the woman is seduced by? I guess they're impervious to handsome, rugged white guys. What a joke.

A decent story but a couple of points to note. Use the ‘Anglo’ rather than the Latinate term, e.g. face instead of visage. More punch imparted this way.

Avoid double phrases. Take the following excerpt as an example:

“Their bodies thrust and gyrated as they came together. The room blurred for the nun. Her body felt boneless. It seemed to float and flow around them.”

“Thrust and gyrated”…”float and flow”. Choose one over the other by default; use a dyad sparingly for effect.

Decent story until the end, with the friend sharing remark wrecking the story IMO. I agree with others that the "always the black guy" thing is a tired old cliche' that I am starting to find a bit offensive for a few reasons.