by inafantasy
I thought it was awesome, at least the content was. There were a couple of teachers and librarian in my high school i wanted to expose myself to and jerk off to. With them watching. Thanks for that. Keep up the awesome job. HI
Not bad but give us the finally. This one could've been all about teach. Instead of jumping into & rushing his summer work project, it would've made for a lot better read to have slowed down the summer with teach. You could've made the next chapter all about mom or just added a page or two to this one. The last page & a half of this read like you were just racing to the finish line. JMO. Could only go with a 4☆for that reason. Let's see where the next part leads.