All Comments on 'Teaching Ch. 01'

Without grammer or even spelling out you, a story can become unreadable

I think this author is male, just guessing of course, but his descriptions beg a female touch. But the surrounding does sound real, and believalble, but not very sexy.

I think the author, should spend a little more time/words describing the feelings, the sensations, the love, etc. Perhaps he should read more women's stories. (they're the hottest).

Rudy

Anonymous more or less accuses someone of plagiarism. I don't know, but s/he might be right - in which case s/he should tell us the source of the story s/he thinks has been plundered. If s/he is wrong, s/he is guilty of an even more serious crime than plagiarism - but how can we know, if s/he doesn't provide the necessary evidence?

another story titled (teaching mom) exactly the same