by dansouthwest
Thank you for reading my new story guys. It's a story line I developed back in 2017 but have altered it a bit and hoping to write more. Any comments or suggestions on the plot can be emailed to Dan.southwest@hotmail.com. much love.
Great read! I’m absolutely loving the romantic twist the story has, it adds a touch of wholesomeness that’s kind of cathartic
Overall it’s a decent story, although this chapter does have a glaring problem. It’s physically impossible to get a cock beyond the cervix and into the uterus/ womb. If anything remotely close to that occurred she would need urgent medical treatment and be in incredible pain !
That slip up was a bit jarring (in an ouch! Kind of way) it could have worked as a narrative if it had been left as her interpretation of events.
Thanks for sharing.
Tess (uk)