All Comments on 'Teaching Demi Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Why reissue a story from 11/4/2017?

Why do you repost an story from 2017?

dansouthwestdansouthwestabout 3 years agoAuthor
Edited my old story

Thank you for reading my new story guys. It's a story line I developed back in 2017 but have altered it a bit and hoping to write more. Any comments or suggestions on the plot can be emailed to Dan.southwest@hotmail.com. much love.

DoroKunDoroKunabout 3 years ago

Great read! I’m absolutely loving the romantic twist the story has, it adds a touch of wholesomeness that’s kind of cathartic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Overall it’s a decent story, although this chapter does have a glaring problem. It’s physically impossible to get a cock beyond the cervix and into the uterus/ womb. If anything remotely close to that occurred she would need urgent medical treatment and be in incredible pain !

That slip up was a bit jarring (in an ouch! Kind of way) it could have worked as a narrative if it had been left as her interpretation of events.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

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I'm been a great fan of Literotica for over a decade and now have decided to start writing my own stories. All comments and feedbacks welcome and if anyone fancies the idea of editing my work kindly email me on dan.southwest@hotmail.com. Cheers.

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