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"You haven't read their files." Isa grinned.
"But if he used Serenex to make those girls his love slaves, fuck up their heads like he did his neighbor... maybe we're going to need some to fix them?"
Isa frowned, plainly not liking it. I didn't dare look up. Three years of high school drama club weren't going to be a match for police academy training and that dump truck of suspicion she was driving around.
"We'll figure something out."
"You're the one who told me that it's going to be permanent, or at least take a really long time to work out, because the LSD and all the other crap." LSD? What the hell? "If he... if Cassie..." Her jaw quivered. Looked like there was some maternalism there. I'd be more touched if I weren't so preoccupied imagining how much was left of my dwindling supply as the stream whisked down into the drain.
"We're going to take care of her, baby."
"But what if weneed it? I know, we talked about it being too much a temptation and blahdy blah blah, but this might be the only way to make things right!"
Isa glared, but I could see she was breaking. But as the canister grew lighter, the only question was whether she'd--
Candy broke first, her hand closed over mine. "Canon, stop."
Instantly, I stopped. It was all I could do not to heave a sigh of relief. There was quite possibly less left in the canister than what I'd already used since buying it, but as Candy snatched it from my hand and set it on the counter, I could hear the sound of its contents trickling around in there. Some was left. Thank god.
I could go on letting Abbie use my Serenex whenever she wanted. I simply had to hope she didn't want to very often.
Isa glared, plainly not liking her girlfriend's decision. Candy simply shook her head. "We got him, Isa. We won. But human garbage or no, he's right. Those girls are fucked in the head, and this might be the only way to fix them. Or do you really think even a couple of brats like Abbie and Taylor deserve to spend the rest of their lives pining for this piece of garbage?"
"Hey, I'm standing right here."
Isa lowered her taser, though the tremble in her arm bespoke her desire to do anything but. "Canon, if I ever see you so much as glance at another girl at that school... I will find a way to wreck the rest of your pathetic life. I have buddies who work in corrections. They can give me all kinds of tips about how to keep you safe and protected while still making your life a living hell."
"Um, sure. Whatever you say, Isa. I will do whatever you tell me to do."I will choke you with those words.
"Good. Now get the fuck out of my house, and don't you ever come back."
I nodded. "Sure thing. And, um, not for nothing, but... thanks for dinner."
I meant to serve them a dish of my own. Something served nice and cold.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoHad wondered why he gave the full canister away, although a small sample would have been enough for lab tests. Now I see why; it allowed for, again, a brilliant plot twist.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI love it.
We want to root for our MC, not just because he's the MC, but because we can see he really has been trying hard to make the best of bad circumstances. He could have just gone all-out and programmed each one to obey all of his commands (as these two did), but *instead,* he did his best to use the lightest touches possible, to do no worse than the situation demanded. Even with his blackmailer, he *still* declined to program her to "obey," instead making her "cooperate with and support" whatever he wants so that she would never go against him again, while also accepting whatever punishment(s) he demands as recompense. (We'll assume the fact that it effectively amounts to the same thing to be an unfortunate side-effect.)
All that said, while we readers understand that his personal shade of gray is actually pretty light, these two women don't. And, knowing / not knowing what they do, their actions would normally be borderline heroic – exactly what we'd normally cheer for. After all, they're circumventing their own *mind control* to thwart their own mind-controller and (what they consider) a serial rapist! That could easily be the plot of its own story, with them as the MCs. (In fact, that *is* the plot of season 1 of Jessica Jones, iirc.)
But, since we *do* know so much, firsthand, their actions instead become those of antagonists to be overcome. Their attempted programming goes far, *Far* beyond anything our MC ever set out to do... even with his blackmailer. And for that, they lose (nearly?) all of our support.
Seriously. Great job, my man!
inconc3ivableover 3 years agoI was enjoying the way everything had come together, but the story definitely needed some more conflict to prolong things. But that said, I did NOT see this coming! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThe title says it all.
As a side note: try to make him last longer in bed before he comes. You describe the foreplay so well and you give the impression that foreplay takes a long time which is amazing. But that creates the expectation of the main dish being just as long and detailed. I think prolonging the sex scene will build up and make it hotter. As for revenge. You can now justify him going nuts and making them a quivering mess using a trigger phrase and using them in every way out of spite. Like them being unable to resist him. Getting weak on the knees.
Anonymousover 3 years agoyou needed some conflict and this will be fun to see how it works out.
Nice revelation that Taylor is consensual, I suspect if we could hack through a lot of BS we place on ourselves, this would be the case with many sex partners that often after the fact are contested. Never been there but dealt with it a lot in the military.
