All Comments on 'Teaching Kat 02: Taking her V-Card'

by Kveldulf

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woodwardwoodwardabout 4 years ago

Very enjoyable. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I'd love to see

Brian fuck Michelle to loosen her up. Maybe with Kat there if not participating. Great series!

Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelineabout 4 years ago

This is a really fun story line. I especially like the ramping up of Kat's personality and confidence in this chapter. I await the next episode!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Ministers daughter...

It’s always the kids that have to be controlled at home that go wild when they’ve got a taste of freedom, I knew a Ministers Daughter that was into everything out with friends, but a demure, quiet controlled mouse with her Sulphurous Father. Poor kid, we all felt sorry for her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
MORE!!!!!

This story Is hoooot AF!

Can the next chapter be maybe first anal!?

I can't wait to see whats next!

WittonWittonalmost 4 years ago
Why?

The story line isn't exactly new, but the author develops the characters of the four major players extremely well; I missed any rationale the narrator had to justify cheating on his wife (or any guilt as a consequence) but that doesn't make a whole lot of difference.

The sex narratives are first rate stroke material - much better than the usual offerings in this genre - but suffers from my particular bête noire.

The narrator is delayed, as are must wannabe deflower-ers in erotic fiction, stymied by the virgin's hymen, which seems to be located two or more inches inside the entry of her vagina. In the first edition of Gray's Anatomy (1856) the hymen was described as [I paraphrase] "... a thin piece of mucosal tissue that surrounds or partially covers the external vaginal opening. It forms part of the vulva, or external genitalia." and the 41st edition (2015) has not changed the particulars one bit. As it was, as it is, as it shall always be ....

The imperforate hymen, which requires surgery to correct, has an estimated frequency of from 1 in 1000 to1 in 10,000, is not what the authors are subjecting there characters to.

So why is a first rate piece of writing cluttered up by such nonsense?

ausvirgoausvirgoalmost 4 years ago
Great Story!

I agree with Witton about the hymen, though.

It's amazing how many writers get this simple anatomical fact wrong.

Clearly a few guys have been hogging the virgins and limiting the other guys' education.

Tp all you female virgins out there - you have a duty to get out there and show the guys where the hymen is, while you've still got it. Okay, I know that technically you don't actually lose your hymen, it just gets torn or stretched, but you know what I mean.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

Still moves too fast.

Four stars

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Good follow up same standard of writing keep it up

AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

These story line should become a film!

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