All Comments on 'Teammates Trial'

Need to finish. The story

I wish I was one of those guys

Nice improvement over earlier version.

thanks for the feedback guys, would love to hear from more of you, plan on publishing this with another couple of short stories soon :)

The second chapter of this can be found at - https://www.literotica.com/s/teammates-trial-ch-02

And chapter 3 isn't far off

Great story, I can't wait to hear about the rest of the weekend.

Thanks for reading. I’ve got heaps of writing on other platforms, including published works. Feel free to get in touch with me for more.