by rene_tx
If she was raped, where are the calls to the police? If she was raped, wouldn't she be in pain..and not the good kind either...so who knows what STD's she may hve been exposed to...or the pregnancy...and all they can think of is fucking each other? Right. Not very erotic, thanks anyway.
This was one of the best stories I have ever read.I know this sounds sexest but I have to say a story this hot to be written by a woman is fantastic.It makes me wonder how much of whats in this story the auther may have done or would do.Keep up the good work.You have a fan in Boston......................Tom
Getting all caught up in the legal, medical and psychological possiblities is what someone would do if we were reading an actual account of a rape. It may be that the man in the garage is known by the husband and he knows they need not worry about STD's, pregnancy, etc. It may be that she realized that the man in the garage was her husband's brother.
dirty little cum filled slut!!! The four of us should get together as soon as possible...tanlvr@hotmail.com
Eroticism isn't crude or gross or revolting - this was a half baked teenagers non-reality packaged in childish smut without a pink bow.<P>
Constructively, what are you aiming for audience wise? This wasn't for the semi-normals - it was less than stroke - it was just disgusting. If that was your intent then be satisfied with the less than 1% into freaky sordid disrespect and self disrespect in a marital scum fest.<P>
What were you not thinking?<P>
Perhaps you can do better - if you wish not to waste your talent.
You know the immature morons who try to attack authors because they don't like the content but read the stories anyway. Secretly I think these gutless wimps actually like these stories but aren't "big" enough to own up to it. Come back to the site when you're old enough and have some sexual experience or at least an imagination like the rest of us and can appreciate erotica of all types.