All Comments on 'Tease Me Once'

Wuf ! More, please.

Can't wait for more, to see how their story progresses. Please write more, this is incredible.

You've got to follow through on this buildup! HOT only begins to describe this. I want MORE...

. . . and very hot! You've laid the groundwork for a very special series. I look forward to future chapters.

Left me breathless. Hot and sexy, hope you continue with this story line. Give us detail in future chapters - where she lives, what her surroundings are. Why is step-father home but mother isn't? That sort of thing. You'll really fill out the characters and keep your readers hungry!

Very hot! Let's have Sean take more control, ordering her to wear lingerie, stockings & garters, and higher heels so she can really be his little slut.

great story. wanted to be right there, and that's what great writing is all about! can't wait to see more.

I just found this story and it's really amazing. I'm sad you haven't written a second chapter.

Suger slut....loved it.

Simply.....amazing

that was perfect. i cant wait to read more.

so hott you need to write more for this.

Please write more of this, this is. You're writing and the story line are amazing.

omg!!!! i love the way that you wrote this...please write more of this one

Hot

I want more!

I love it !! I want more! !

Eleven year old girls don't have these fantasies.

wish my daddy would do this to me ;)

As a female who was once 11, i can tell you whomever said 11 year olds dont think that is completly wrong and it just depends on the girl. I had a girlfriend in 3rd grade so 8 years old it was only kissing and holding hands. But come summer after 4th grade her 17 year old sister found out about us and took it upon herself to teach us how couples make each other happy and she taught two 9 year olds how to not only finger and pleasure ourselves but also how to makeout, fingerfuck each other, nipple play, eating pussy and the use of a bullet vibe. So yes at 11 i had fantasies about what it would be like with a penis especially after i saw one of my older brothers friends when i was 10. And at 12 that same friend who was 16 popped my "cherry" and fucked me til i begged him to stop but he kept going til he came inside me and he was also who taught me how to suck a cock til he came in my mouth.

And why the hell would he want to let any other guy fuck her?? The ending is baffling.