by Traciturner
This is an erotic story site and your story was very erotic, it gets an A from me for affect.
Traci,
I really enjoyed your story I hope you write more. I really loved the exhibitionist parts, I can watch ladies at the mall all day. It sounds like your very sexy. Thank you for your story I hope to read more.
Luft
they will not be wrong . Enjoyed this. Thank you.
Pretty good story.
The main character, to me, didn't seem fully developed or particularly realistic. I would think, if she was very conservative and unadventurous in her sex life, she would likely be a little more hesitant and/or careful (with both the alcohol and the dancing) even if she did want to try something totally unlike anything she had ever tried before.
However, I liked it and really hope you continue to write here.