All Comments on 'Teaser Ch. 01'

by Traciturner

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melsdadmelsdadover 12 years ago
loved your story, congratulations

This is an erotic story site and your story was very erotic, it gets an A from me for affect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very sexy!!!

Traci,

I really enjoyed your story I hope you write more. I really loved the exhibitionist parts, I can watch ladies at the mall all day. It sounds like your very sexy. Thank you for your story I hope to read more.

Luft

speddy13speddy13over 12 years ago
Awesome

Great story, keep them coming!

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
When someone looks in the mirror & wonders if they have gone too far ...

they will not be wrong . Enjoyed this. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Pretty good story.

The main character, to me, didn't seem fully developed or particularly realistic. I would think, if she was very conservative and unadventurous in her sex life, she would likely be a little more hesitant and/or careful (with both the alcohol and the dancing) even if she did want to try something totally unlike anything she had ever tried before.

However, I liked it and really hope you continue to write here.

Anonymous
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