by Kinetic9124
The story is great. I gave 5 stars on the merits of tease. The grammar is something else, however. It needs an editor. Enough about that. Good job on your tease.
What an evil tease you are.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
This teasing is much more interesting than the (easy to write) shagging. Needs imagination. It’s great, you’ve got a fan until you change.