All Comments on 'Teasing the Gardeners Ch. 01'

When will liter authors get over this broken POV for stories? It doesn't work this time. It won't work next time. It never works. It's just awful. Don't do it. Like, ever.

Writing in 2nd person is tough in stories like these, I usually go with 1st personally but that's a style thing.

Sexy little story though, have to be careful when teasing the neighbors or visitors! Sometimes they won't be happy with just peeking through the windows!

I very much liked this story, you did a great job!

second person pov sucks

Try again!

Not sure why people are complaining about the POV; it's still enjoyable and it's a shame more stories aren't written this way. Keep up the good work.

This is fucking hot I came at least 3 times reading this, good work!!

Great story!