All Comments on 'Teasing Tuesdays Ch. 02'

You have the ability, to make my mind believe every sensual word. Bravo.

Teasing Tuesdays is only two chapters! When I include all the stories in her file; I'm flabbergasted at how sensual every story is!! Mostly mature women and they are smoking hot to" pant" over and over and over!! I like that the men take lots of foreplay and make sure their women are ready for the good hard loving sex!!! Your descriptions make real stories ! You are awesome as a writer!! Bravo!!!

Wish I had a landlady - or a neighbor - like that!

Two suggestions - the condoms detracted from my enjoyment of the story - and I've noticed that you use too many commas. Doesn't seriously damage the story, but a little harder to read. Overall, very good!!