by CrazyDaveTrucker60
Funny. At some point I had to skip over the sex stuff because it was too repetitive. I would like to find this town though. Every woman is hot with big tits and ready to fuck anyone with a big dick. I think it's near fantasy island... The little sub island for 12 to 16 year olds.
But...I did make it to the end. Was kinda hoping it turned into a 'this was a dream' thing but no... Doubled down in the end.
I really enjoyed it. It was funny as all hell at times, especially at the hospital scenes. Seemed all of the women wanted a piece of the action. :-)
A bit funny but mostly totally unrealistic, ridiculous and boring. Just nonsense, not good, not bad, nothing likable.
Completely plausible storyline. Likely to happen exactly as described. Sounds almost autobiographical.
Yeah, I’ve cummed in 23 women in one day and sprayed several of them on the outside, too.
Yeah. I’d buy that.
Raunchy, raucous and fun, in a silly, impossible sort of strok-ey way.
MY heart. bleeds for Ted and the loss of his marriage, the poor chap was so devastated that he "found he could only fuck four or five women each night, but he could orally service ten a night, if he had to!"
Yup, I can feel his anguish from here. :)
No one writes over the top like CDT60
Silliest story I've read in a long time but enjoyable. The authors fantasy is everymans fantasy, get revenge on mean evil wife while getting yourself slmost fucked to death.
to the people who are complaining about the lack of realism, its called -fantasy-, this isn't some true story, its erotica, get over it. It was humorous. I'd love a much longer harem version of this story but for the condensed version, very funny and well done.
Lol, love it, time to visit the doctor, it's time to check up on is penis, if he's got a std or Aids, was he firing blanks or got good swimmers? Because the amount of the fucking he's doing, I'm surprised that his dicks not fallen off,
EITHER WAY, loved the story,
It's so bad it's good! Seriously, though, it reads like it was written by a committee of junior high school boys who just discovered a stack of Hustlers in Grandpa's basement.