All Comments on 'Teenager's Ass'

I have read your stories many of them more than once you always leave me horny and wanting more. Keep it up thanks.

its my experiance that baby oil and latex condoms dont mix.....the oil weakens the condom to the point that the condom disintergrates and bursts at tip due to friction......if your not using ky or astro lube use non latex condoms.....apart from that a good cock hardening story...

The story was excellent. You established the set-up and got to the action quickly without making it seemed forced. Just enough information to make the story plausible and you even managed to leave it open ended enough to revisit this pair another time. Way to go!

Thank you!

KY is the stuff, otherwise, really good story, Boxie.

Thats the kind of story that offers unlimited potential, and very well written!!!

and wooden. All about the physical, very little about the people. It didn't 'live' for me at all.

Loved the story and so glad to see you have written many more. This is the first of your stories I have read. Good to see you have covered the topic again as it is disappointing to read one good story then to find all the others by an author are on different subjects.

Using baby oil with a latex condom is a great way to get the condom to break. Suggest you edit the story to use something more appropriate.

Usually the participants in my stories use Aqualube but, in this case, he didn't have any. Darren did not expect somebody to come over and want him to fuck her ass, so he had to use what was available. The next time they get together, he will be better prepared, but I probably won't be writing about that.

Amazing story and I enjoyed it thouroughly. :)

Great story and very easy to read i have a collage age daughter and as much space as i give her friends....... they are about 20 now and id be lying if i said i hadnt looked. Thanks for the great read

Nice loveable story !

My personal preference is what you ve missed out in oral sex is SMELL of young healthy pussy & ofcourse of ass . My sexperience with a late teen girl RAIN is the strong overpowering cheesy odour of her sweaty stmeay feet , fermemted pungent musky smell of her hairy wet pussy , cock like sharp male scent of stale cock & ofcourse heady heavy animal like aroma of ass , not of shit but shity , sweaty , musky stench of a teen ass . Fucking her tight ass , my groin stuck to her parted cheeks , fucking essence filling the room & tickling her nipples 7 clit , & cumming together ........

Me: I enjoyed the story.

Darren: I’m glad, because I did too.