by ArtyGee
Cory and Donnie need to change the password and cut Marty out of the loop.. Soon Anna will be fucking Jamal for weed. The boys can farm her out.
Great stories.
An idea, maybe she can get revenge on Donnie and make Alfred hypno him into become teenanna?
I'd like him to fight for his girlfriend. It is a great story line. I hope you can keep it going.
I was in favor of Colby (or is it Cory) stealing Anna away from Martin. Martin deserved to lose her and go to jail. But Colby gave the codeword to Donnie, who pimped her out to Eddie and Jamil. I hope Annie can get to Alfred and he can undo what he has done or else he needs to go to jail also. What bothers me is she is sure to be pregnant now...but by whom...Marty? Colby (Cory)? Donnie? or Eddie?
While I was hoping to see more of Colby and the adult version of Anna, there is no denying that this was a good chapter. The scene with the brothers was great. I hope you keep going with this storyline.
I would rather see Marty be with "teenanna",but at this point you've ruled that out.If she's become such a slut why should she draw the line at her uncle?
Time for Real Anna to make a run for it. The storyline was fun until they started degrading her.
Marty is treating his wife like a sex object rather than a real person to whom he's married. He doesn't care that she objects to what is happening to her as long as he gets his kicks.
Colby has never seen Anna as anything more than a sex object (literally all they do is fuck. She's not his girlfriend) and that was evident even before he shared her with Donnie and even worse shared the trigger with Donnie.
Anna is the victim, but she could do a lot more to convince Marty that the game needs to end. She could also send TeenAnna a message so that she's not so susceptible to the time swap. Maybe her doing next to nothing is part of her hypnosis since we don't know the full extent and if that is the case, then she's absolved of any culpability.
You need to continue this story maybe haveing donnie and his brother use her more or have jamal figure it out and addict her to sex