All Comments on 'Telekinesis Ch. 04'

by VallesMarineris

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SirKevin about 1 year ago

Outstanding! Loved all the mythical references, and I intend to read the earlier chapters. Glad you released an FFM chapter so I could find your work.

VallesMarineris about 1 year agoAuthor

@SirKevin, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. Stay tuned for more FFM in a future chapter.

And you might like my previous story, SubConscious. You may notice a simmering FF crush in the early chapters that ignites in the last chapters to full on FFM. Check it out.

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