All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 08'

Great story. I really liked it a lot! However,

You keep confusing 'your' and 'you're'!!!!!

'Your' is possessive - eg. This is your house, your car, your slave

'You're' is the contraction of 'you are' - eg. You're not concentrating on your grammar.

If you're unsure if you have used them correctly, substitute 'you are' when reading the sentences - eg. She is you're (you are) slave, which then is obviously the wrong word to use

I, for one, am tired of reading the comments about grammar. If you have read the previous chapters and their comments, you will notice the author is well aware of his mistakes with your/you're. It's not constructive criticism anymore, it's just annoying. Just read the story and enjoy!

I've read each chapter and have enjoyed each one more than the last. The story is really starting to come together! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!

Oh, and if you would like a proofreader, I'm available. Haha!

TS

Gayest

WHAT PART OF THIS ENTIRE SERIES IS GAY?!?!?!?!?!

ARGH.. you pulled out the ol' humans only use 10% of their brain myth. I could get over it for one tale or two even if it is bull, but it gets way overused. Just a pet peeve, awesome story on the whole!

Surely he needs to get revenge on his cheating whore wife and so called friends I’m so wanting to see evil Thomas lol