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Warm heat rushed through my legs centred on my core. The fingers thrusting into me, the fingers on my clit, the tongue lapping at the two of them all while my own fingers grasped at the sheets of Jen's bed. I bit down on my tongue hard as my muscles tightened in desperation. My back held position arched and taut like a bowstring ready to fire. I needed it. It was all too much. I had to crest but I had no control over speeding it up or affecting it in anyway. I was along for the ride and - there! White hot release flashed through my eyes and liquid poured from my core into my underwear and onto the bed. My body exploded. My stomach rolled and my toes curled until they hurt with the exertion. I heard a moan that should have been faint and quiet and at the foot of my bed echo in my head from multiple directions like a perfectly acoustic theatre. I felt the groan well up in my lungs and build towards my throat. I fought to hold it in. I fought desperately. Every part of my body was tense, I couldn't relax my throat. A strangled hiss escaped and that was all.
My back lowered itself to the bed with my arms still clutching the sheets for support and grounding. It met a damp sheet, wet from my own sweat. When my legs straightened and relaxed, my thighs encountered a sheet wet from my own release. My chest struggled to keep up with the need for air and my head pounded with the blood rushing through it. My body juddered with a post-orgasmic shiver. I again opened my eyes to light reflecting off the walls. This light however was a far deeper, redder colour. Blood red perhaps. Or maybe the colour of a rose. I wasn't certain of its meaning but I knew exactly what Kate was experiencing right now. I however, had experienced three times the amount of pleasure without touching myself even once. With every muscle in my body having conducted the equivalent of multiple intensive workout sessions and juices falling from my exhausted pussy, it was no surprise that my eyes rapidly began to close. Fireworks of light exploded behind my eyelids as my thoughts flickered randomly. The lines between consciousness and unconsciousness blurred. As I drifted away, I heard one last line from somewhere past my legs.
"Woah."
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- COMMENTS
Bleep735about 4 years agoWow. Perfect execution of a complex and ingenious concept. I loved the humor weaved in with the emotional overload. Just perfect.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI enjoyed reading this very much, and am just about to read chapter 2. The only thing I believe could be worked on is making sure it’s clear what is happening. Most of the time I didn’t know who was thinking what, and whether or not it was just a fantasy or real.
HiddenInTheOpenalmost 5 years agoWow, great plot idea, and great story so far. I am getting ready to read chapter 2, and hope you write more chapters in this story! Thanks for sharing it with us!
BritniPepperalmost 5 years agoI loved this story. A sparklingly different approach to sexual fantasy, and as the story progresses, the reader is drawn along in a world of fantasy and self-pleasure.
Well-written, five stars!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoExcellent theme, well written and hope this is the start of an interesting story about this person and her gift or not depending the readers thoughts, of how life continues forward. More please, but hey.... You knew this any way as you just read my thoughts.
hanna_aalmost 5 years agoof lesbian fantasies. It is difficult to follow which images she sees in the other girl's mind and which are her own (as going down on Rose) - but I tink that is a good description of the confusion a telepathic might feel if awakend by arousal in the middle of the night.
Excellent and intelligent work. I'd like to read more of this!
Maddie624almost 5 years agoI think that this could be the beginning of an awesome series of chapters. I like getting to understand what Ally is like when she is at this age and what she is experiencing from the thoughts/actions of other people. I do believe, however, that you could take this a bit deeper...I don't know if that is the word I am really looking for...What I mean is that it would be cool to get to know this girl more on a personal level. What makes her tick or what is her own personality like aside from her abilities? What happens if she falls in love with someone, or if they fall in love with her? Basically, I'm just wondering if you are going to keep this more superficial or if you are going to delve into this character's life and build plotlines from things that happen in her life (friends, family, school, work, etc.). I do really enjoy your writing style and the level of description that you offer your readers. I think that is why I look forward to seeing where you go with this, should you choose to take it further. :)
Ps. That may or may not make any sense...it is 1:30 am here and I am fantasizing about tomorrow's coffee...It's sad but true.
jenorma2012almost 5 years agoI always wondered what it would be like to be a telepathic and what they would go through in a day, I do hope you keep this going
