All Comments on 'Tell it to My Heart Ch. 03'

You create believable/knowable characters — by knowable I mean they come to life for the reader/feel like you could touch them — within a storyline that vibrates/resonates with this reader. Both women with agency. This piece focuses on Andi - troubled, fascinating and so sensual. The way you weaved the pieces of this romance together is beautiful. If I have a complaint it is the brevity with which you dealt with Shara and Andi’s breakup/divorce — did not undermine the strength of this piece or overall romantic feel, and I suppose to do that justice would have required quite a bit more which might have distracted us. Needless to say, as a near hopeless romantic I would love to follow “your favorite characters” further along on their journey if you have the urge to share more. If not, I’ll read whatever you create and share. 5 🌟 for each chapter.

No no that can’t be the end 😢 I thought we would have more of andi and Lilly not andi and shara.

There will be more!!! I’m writing chapter four as we speak. Andi and Lilly will keep going!

Rose Monroe.🌹

Great to see this story resume. I was still an anonymous commentator when the previous chapter was published. So I have been reacquainting myself with the earlier chapters. It was a pleasure to read them all. And I'm now looking forward to the continuation of Andi and Lilly's romance.

Your work gets better and better. Well done!

Great story. I can't wait to read more about Andi and Lilly.

While I would not like to see Andi go back to Shara, I would like some closure for her. I hate cheats.

Ideally I would really like to see Shari realise her mistake and what she lost. Lily and Andi need their story expanded on. Give them a real story.

A spell binding series