All Comments on 'Temptations Ch. 02'

Damn Man great job on this here part two. I really liked first one but this one is even better. You Man do some more

me like is good.

Come on man and get off your ass and finish this story

It is geting beter all along,

Keep up the good work,,

Speed Up the good work

Ive been a bit busy, between work and my family, AND I have put out like 5 stories in the past month. But I am trying my best to finish several of them...Temptations part3 included. Thanks for all the postive comments and all.

YOU PEOPLE JUST BACK OFF. IF YOUR RUSH THIS, THEN IT WON'T BE AS GOOD AS IT WILL BE IF HE TAKES HIS TIME. ARTISTS NEED TIME TO CREATE & BLOSSOM THEIR PROJECTS. BY RUSHING THEM, YOU'LL GET 2ND OR 3RD RATE NONSENSE. SO EVERYONE JUST CHILL & GIVE THE GUY SOME TIME.

So dude, what's taking so long? Hurry up! lmao Just kidding. Excellent story man! Part one teased the hell out of me & I loved it! This one was even better! Can't wait, but I will for as long as it takes, for the third installment! Take it easy & happy writing in the future! See ya next story...later

Jim

Definitely erotic. We all know Ginger is going to be an orgy girl fucking Nick and sucking Linda. The only question is how you bring it together and how you keep husband and wife happily together. It could blow everything apart.

This is great stuff! Take all the time in the world, just remeber the bigger the build-up, the harder the climax!

I would like to give this story a better score, but Kenny is such a tool! The long winded diatribes from this character really spoil what otherwise is a hot story.

You write great stories, hope you'll have time to finish the next chapter soon. The sexual content and build-up is superb, though putting your stories through a spell check might make them even better... and I can't help noticing that you repeatedly use a weird line in your stories: "She shook her head 'yes'"...

It's actually impossible to 'shake your head yes'. That's called 'nodding'. Shaking one's head means 'no'. Just a little tip... Keep up the good work! :-)

This is great stuff but the pressure is building and I need a release, so how about the big finish dude! I want to have a smoke roll over and go to sleep already!