All Comments on 'Tempting Father Hardy'

loved the story bur richard turned to micheal in the middle of a paragraph

I actually think it would have been more powerful if she'd not been a demon at the end

God this was honestly a suspenseful read I like how she lied about the boy in her office and the whole story just to get the priest, she manipulated his personal insecurities as well as his religious duties to get him close to her and the sex scenes that were described were very hot to read and the last scene where she claims him is just so juicy to read, it is something that I would like in a first time of sex with somebody if I are going to be with said person forever, if there was a roleplay vibe to my sex life.

First off, sorry for the name mistake; it's really hard to proof-read your own work. I did try to get an editor to check it, but didn't get a response. I've submitted an edited version.

Otherwise, happy if you liked it, shame if you didn't! I get that some wouldn't like the supernatural angle, but that was actually my whole reason for writing it. I've seen a few stories that had a twist where the woman turns out to be a demon, and thought I would try my own version of that idea. Naturally some won't like that, but I guess there's no idea out there that everybody will like. I rather like how it turned out, but completely understand if it's not your thing.

Thank you for the comments, good or bad. I love getting feedback from readers.

I loved this story.

I would have loved it if she teased him for longer. Torture his torn conscience a little more. Perhaps he could have come another time and and slipped her cock through the confessional and tempted him to get down on his knees and give it a kiss. ("Just a kiss Father") have him obsessed with that kiss, that moment till the next time they met. Drive him to his limits till he was just begging for it.

Perhaps also, at the end, the demon could have left him in his role as priest but in her service. She could randomly appear in his booth while he was listening to a confessional. Lift her massive meat stick and have him worship her gargantuan balls while he listened to others confess their sins.

Maybe she could even endow him with a bigger cock and have him slowly corrupt the wives and and innocent virgin little daughters in his congregation. Also, get the young insecure boys to serve her.

My imagination is running wild, sorry. I just loved the story. I look forward to more from you.

Being a former christian and current atheist I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very erotic and sensual.